I loved the beginning with Fanboy Jared. He's about the best thing in the world. EVER! I felt his nerdy excitement. I think you've done a great job gettting those feelings acrros. And man, the photo-op! I so would have loved to see that picture. :)
I loved Chad in this. I really enjoyed reading him as not a total douche for once. I think it's a little sad that often in fic he's put into that category and I'm happy you didn't. I mean, he was a bit of a douche but not entirely. *g*
Jared asking Jensen to go on a date with him was probably the cutest thing in the world. I felt pretty much for them when the first date didn't go too well. Poor Jared. And I felt for them and their dating disasters. When things didn't work out for them at first, I think you've done a great job with creating the tension between them and how it affects the people around them.
I really liked the progress of the relationship and how it did not go smoothly but how it grew once they had everything figured out and how, in the end, they became such a wonderful, strong unit.
I loved your writing style. It's smart and witty, nice and has an easy flow that's nice to read. Jared's train of thoughts style really worked for me. The various elements you included - the article of the convention, the emails, Jensen's panel, the movie reviews, the interviews - really enhanced the style. Very creative!
I love how you put those little SPN tidbits in there, like the bees story or Dead in the water. Very smart!
You've done a great job with this! I hope to see more fic from you in the future. Thank you!
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Date: 2008-06-16 11:51 pm (UTC)I loved the beginning with Fanboy Jared. He's about the best thing in the world. EVER! I felt his nerdy excitement. I think you've done a great job gettting those feelings acrros. And man, the photo-op! I so would have loved to see that picture. :)
I loved Chad in this. I really enjoyed reading him as not a total douche for once. I think it's a little sad that often in fic he's put into that category and I'm happy you didn't. I mean, he was a bit of a douche but not entirely. *g*
Jared asking Jensen to go on a date with him was probably the cutest thing in the world. I felt pretty much for them when the first date didn't go too well. Poor Jared. And I felt for them and their dating disasters. When things didn't work out for them at first, I think you've done a great job with creating the tension between them and how it affects the people around them.
I really liked the progress of the relationship and how it did not go smoothly but how it grew once they had everything figured out and how, in the end, they became such a wonderful, strong unit.
I loved your writing style. It's smart and witty, nice and has an easy flow that's nice to read. Jared's train of thoughts style really worked for me. The various elements you included - the article of the convention, the emails, Jensen's panel, the movie reviews, the interviews - really enhanced the style. Very creative!
I love how you put those little SPN tidbits in there, like the bees story or Dead in the water. Very smart!
You've done a great job with this! I hope to see more fic from you in the future. Thank you!